Saturday, August 15, 2009

A character I've mentioned before, Claire.

Claire was inspired by this picture

Claire is a young girl with an unknown ability. Claire is a mysterious young girl. Her real name and past are unknown, as she never speaks, so it is unknown if she even can, but it seems that she can understand people talking. .. She was taken into the Gift Program at some point at around age 8. At first, it is believed she has clairvoyance, which is a heightening of all senses, hence the name given to her, Claire.

Claire is extremely powerful, perhaps even stronger than Klaus or Pao, although it seems that Pao can suppress her abilities.


The people who caught here, not related to the company, wish to use her abilities.

When Claire activates her power, her whole body turns into energy. Her body turns red, and time seems to slow around her. She can move at super high speed, her strenght is multiplied, and she can release powerful energy blasts. Claire cannot fully control her powers. If she had full control, it is entirely possible that she would be the strongest character in the series.


As ive mentioned before, she wears large headphones, a machine belt, as well as a machine bracelet of her left hand. These machines monitor her body functions and can either suppress her powers, or make it easier for her to use them.



I came up with a scene.

I dont have anything before it, so some stuff might not make sense. This happens in a rocky desert, perhaps not far from a city.

Anyway, Claire descends at high speeds from the sky, through the clouds. (Sort of like Naota in Fooly Cooly in the final episode) She heads straight for Klaus. At full force, she kicks him, while still in the air. Klaus is able to block the kick, at the amazement of others. Claire continues attacking, still hovering a few feet off the ground. At one point she opens her mouth, which was not visible since she had activated her powers. Tearing it open as if it was sewn shut, she opens her mouth and shoots out a strong blast, which knocks Klaus back. He gets back up just as she strikes again, blocking a punch. Each clash sends out a powerful shockwave. Klaus tries to land a punch, but Claire disappears just as he is about to hit. She instantly appears behind him, and from below, does an uppercut. Klaus is hit, but manages to get back.

Yadow tries to attack Claire, but she easily moves out of the way, which cause Yadow to hit Klaus. Klaus blocks the shot, but is distracted, and Claire manages to punch him again. Angel blows fire, but once again Claire moves out of the way, and Klaus' coat catches fire. He quickly removes the jacket. "Dammit! Stop it!" "We're just trying to help, you jerk!" "Well youre failing miserably!"

Klaus dodges a punch from Claire and shoots lightning at Yadow and Angel, pushing them away.
Claire begins to glow more, a sign that she is further enhancing her senses. Claire disappears. Suddenly Klaus seems to be hit from every direction at once, and in just 3 seconds is very bruised. Claire slows down a bit, and now she is visible while still hitting Klaus. He manages to block some shots, but she is too quick.

Suddenly, Claire appears standing still next to Klaus. She does not strike. She seems almost frozen. (No steph, you didnt do anything) Claire suddenly flinches in pain as some energy shoots out of her. Although she still does not talk or scream, its clear that she is in pain. She flinches a few more times, shooting energy randomly. Then we see Pao in the distance. Pao is somehow able to surpress Claire's powers. Since Pao's powers are mental, they have nothing to do with the senses, so Claire does not notice that Pao is attacking her. After a few seconds, Claire is knocked out, and returns to normal. As Claire lays on the ground unconcious, two men take Claire and carry her away. Klaus and Pao stare seriously at each other, and Pao teleports away, and takes the two men and Claire.

Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Beginnings

Still having some trouble creating a beginning for the story.

I dislike the government idea more and more each day, so for now, its a company.

Same thing, the company works with natural and artificial gifted. The whole gifted stuff is secret, hidden from the general public. It's a huuuge indoor facility. They have grounds and everything.

Yadow
Mark (Angel)
Steph
Mary



The story begins with Yadow training in one of the facilities. When the staff go away for a bit, he decides to explore around. He climbs a fence and goes to another ground.

He starts attacking some of the obstacles, and while jumping, a young man comes from the air and kicks Yadow down. Yadow falls to the ground and rolls a few times. The young man lands and gets in a fighting pose. His arms suddenly burst into flames, yet he seems ok.

On the floor, Yadow: Hey! What the fuck is wrong with you?! Why the hell did you kick me?!
The young man remains silent. Just who the fuck do you think you a- In that moment, the young man charges again. Yadow crawls backwards as the man punches the ground, which starts burning. When the young man has Yadow cornered H-hey...I think we got off on the wrong foot. C-cant we just be friends? The young man stood silently. Yadow braced himself, its obvious he was not going to be spared. Ok!, the young man said in an overly cheery tone. Yadow stared at him for a bit, questioning his true intentions. The young man extended his arm Need some help? The young man helped Yadow back up, then let him go mid-way, causing Yadow to fall to the floor. The young man laughed. Ahahaha!!! Ok-ok Im sorry! The young man extended his arm once again. Yadow grabbed his hand, and was let go once more. AHAHAHAHA!!!! Its even funnier the second time!! Phew, ok Im sorry, now for real.

Yadow denied and stood up on his own. I'm Mark. I'm Yadow.


Your arms....What happened to your arms? They were on fire a minute ago! Arent you burnt? Yeah. So? So? How did you do that?! What do you mean how did I do that? It's easy, just like this! The young man burst into flames. Yadow jumped back for a bit, scared that something might have happened to Mark, but then he noticed that Mark was unharmed, and that the flames did not consume him.

Wow! That's pretty cool. Yea, I am. Yadow stood silent for a few moments. So, you cant do that?
No. Huh. That's pretty lame. Hey! I can do something a thousand times better! Oh yea? Yadow took a fighting pose and started building up energy. What? Do you have to poo or something? Cuz theres a bathroom over th.... No! Just wait will ya! This takes some time. All right, but if you toot, Im outta here.... Both stood silently. Is this gonna take much longer, cuz....? *sigh* Dammit! I thought I had this down! It worked fine an hour ago! Maybe it's just- In this moment, a large explosion occured. Mark was pushed back.

Yadow was now surrounded by electricity, glowing and burning some of the grass. Huh? Told ya its awesome! Mark stared, in a thinking pose. Meh, kinda sucks. What?! Yadow stopped glowing, and the electricity faded. This is way more awesome than your stupid fire! Nah. Mine's cooler. The two looked at each other with a defiant look. So you think youre better than me?! , both of them yelled out.

Well I bet I can destroy that tree! Yadow threw a thunderbolt at a tree, which instantly burned down. Big deal, I can burn down all those trees. Mark ran towards a group of trees, and blew flames out of his mouth, burning down the trees. Oh yea? Well I can break down that wall!! Yadow pointed to a far away wall and started running towards it. NOT IF I DO IT FIRST!!! Mark raced past Yadow and smashed through the wall. First one to destroy the lights! Yadow jumped on some of the rubble from the wall and started blowing up the lights. Mark turned back and did the same.

This went on for a few other competitions, and the two ended up on another part of the Company.


The two young men were laying on the grass, burnt and bruised. I totally won! You did not! You only did like 3! I took down all the rest!

The shot then changes to a large room. It is practically empty, save for a couch in the middle. A young man was apparently sleeping while sitting on the couch. A door slid open, and a man came in.





While the group was walking around, a thunderstorn started brewing. This is a setup for Klaus. He was out training with the lightning. Yadow also tries to fight lightning, and is knocked on his ass, severely hurt. Lots of flashes. One big flash happens, and a lightningbolt hits right in front of the group. A large flash is seen, followed by thunder. Everything stays white The group thinks they got hit by the lightning bolt. As it clears up, we see Klaus, who had deflected the lightning bolt.

The group talks to him, but he simply runs off, jumps over the bridge and keeps running.

Well nice to meet you too.... The rain got more intense, and the group ran for cover under the old large bridge. Couldn't you stop the rain or something?! Well excuse me if I was distracted by a guy taking a fricking thunderbolt that was about to hit us. Why didn't YOU stop it? Maybe I did... Who the hell was that guy, anyway? He stopped the lightning from hitting us, and he was like nothing happened... Maybe hes an electro too? They told me there are no other electrokinetics... They also told you to kill people, didn't they?

The rain lasted for a while, so the group just stayed under the building, sitting and talking. Yadow was sitting and leaning against the wall. Angel was running around and backflipping off the walls. Steph was in the border of the bridge, manipulating the rainwater falling off the old bridge.

There's all kinds of people out there. People that powerful. I thought I was strong.... Meh, you'll get better. Maybe some day you might even last a minute against me. I could SO beat you! Well I can beat both of you with three arms tied behind my back! You only have two arms.... I never said they were MY arms.... The camera zooms away as the friends bicker and joke around.

Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Havoc Recoil

Based on a guy I know from Devart, I made a new character.

Havoc Recoil

Real name: Havek Reekel (I know!)
Age: 19
Abilities: weapons expert, and a master of hand-to-hand combat.
Other:

He is a mercenary hired to attack the main group. He suffers from a slight Bipolar disorder, which causes him to switch moods frequently. He is an narcissist, this can be observed by the way he presents his card any chance he gets. He even presents it to his targets before he attacks/kills them. Oddly enough, he also has an inferiority complex. All these troubles seem to stem from the fact that his parents were usually occupied with their jobs, and he was often left under the care of his grandmother, who just slept all day. His parents were both mercenaries, and they died in combat. Since he never really spent a lot of time with them, he was not struck by their death. However, he did admire their jobs, and used some of their spare tech to become a mercenary at age 12. He did not get an actual job until he was 17.

He is a weapons expert, usually using his earnings to upgrade his arsenal. As his name might also imply, he is an extremely formidable opponent in hand-to-hand combat. His techniques are based around weaponry and martial arts.

He tries several times to kill the group, but fails each time. Because of this, the group have come to think of him as a nuisance.

He has a certain code of honor, which is ironic as he is known to be a cheater who usually just looks out for himself. He cannot divulge the identity of his employer, and he does not question their motives. If he finds that the target is unreasonable, as in a child, he can refuse the offer.

He is a loner, and avoids working with others. He seems to know Klaus (another character) and actually fears him.

He possesses a ship called the Gunslinger, which is very versatile.

The Gunslinger


The Gunslinger is Havoc's ship, as well as his home. Inside it are his weapons and other possessions. The Gunslinger is a medium sized ship, with about 16 rooms.

Havoc spared no expense in making the Gunslinger a moving fortress, and has equipped it with numerous weapons and defense systems. Even though its only a medium sized ship, Havoc's expertise and weaponry allow it to take down Warships with ease.

The Gunslinger itself is equipped with over 300 weapons

  • Recoil - At the very front of the ship is a small room with a large machine gun. This gun uses very large and sharp pointed bullets. These can even go through steel with little resistance.

The Gunslinger's main and most powerful weapon is the Bullseye. The Bullseye is a large cannon at the front of the ship. The Bullseye is a secret weapon, folded inside the ship, and it takes one minute until it snaps into place. The Bullseye takes 1/4 of the ships total power (regardless the quantity) and fires it as a plasma blast. One shot can clear a 3 mile radius, depending on the power.

He also has 2 smaller ships:

  • Shotgun - the Shotgun is a small one person aircraft. 3 more people can fit inside, but only one can drive. The shotgun can fly very fast, and is excellent at evasive maneuvers. It's got some standard weapons, like rifles, as well as a few bombs. The Shotgun's main weapon is, ironically, a large shotgun in the front. It can fire 5 shots before it needs to be reloaded. Due to Havoc's accurate aim, this is usually more than enough. It also has a Last Resort action, where it releases the wings and other accessories, and flies away at full force, like a rocket. The ship is useless after this maneuver, and is only used to escape if a situation is hopeless.
  • Machinegun - The Machinegun is a strange tank-like vehicle. The machinegun is loaded with over 200 weapons. The Machinegun is made out of 3 layers of very hard metal. It is nigh-impenetrable, and it would take a missile to even dent it. It is an all terrain vehicle, able to move through earth, sand, snow and can even stay underwater for short periods of time (the tank itslef is not affectected by staying underwater, but since its not made for it, it lacks an oxygen supply. The Machinegun's main attack, called the Warzone, consists of revealing 5 large machineguns, one on each side, front, back, as well as various grenade launchers and a large bazooka on top. The attack is used to clear a large area crowded with enemies.
He has considered building a submarine, but since he cannot swim, he tends to avoid jobs that require this sort of thing, or might involve swimming.


Weapons

Havoc is a weapons expert, and claims to possess over 800 different weapons, and over 12,000 ammunitions. He usually spends most of his earnings in new weapons, or upgrading the ones he already has.

His arsenal includes everything from Rifles to handguns, grande launchers, hookshots, swords, daggers and more.

He also has a small glider called the Boomerang. The Boomerang is equipped with a few weapons, and it can be thrown and used as a weapon itself. Havoc usually uses it as a small and portable transportation method that does not draw much attention and can be easily hidden. He can summon the boomerang at any time from his ship, which throws it to his location.

He also uses melee weapons such as swords, daggers, etc...

Havoc is a master at hand-to-hand combat, and is shown to be able to take on multiple fighters at once. He is especially good at dodging, and has acrobat-like maneuvers, which combined with his numerous weapons and tools, make him a worthy adversary. He is a fast runner, and his kicks are especially strong.

Monday, July 6, 2009

Signature Moves

This entry is loooooooooooooong. Bear with me here.

I came up with a concept, or rather, improved one I already had. I came up with an elemental dragon, a dragon that travels around the world. Whenever it touches an element, it loses its previous element, like shedding skin, and becomes the new element. For example, if the dragon touches earth, it becomes stone. If it then goes to the ocean, the stone falls off, and the dragon is made of water.

The dragon flies around the earth, looking for something. This dragon has a connection to the gifts. Im considering perhaps making it the source of the gifts....or perhaps other animals that do this...I dunno...

So far I have come up with two instances where the main characters meet the elemental dragon, once when its element is earth, and it is flying. Another is when they see it again, and it goes to the ocean, where it sheds the earth element and becomes water. Steph uses the hydrosphere (read below) to follow it, but it over powers her and escapes.



New characters:

Gabriel - (18) a young man, orphaned since age 8, when his mother was killed for stealing. He lived all his life in poverty, alone and without a home. At age 10, after having spent an entire month without food, he saw a sign of a monastery. He wondered around the campus, hoping that the nuns or monks would help him. He wondered around the campus, and managed to see the building in the distance. On his way to the monastery, he accidentally wondered inside a nearby power plant that was being activated for the first time. The power plant malfunctioned and had a melt-down. The young man was caught in the blast. The entire area was covered in strange white substance. Almost 2 years later, the young man awoke inside the monastery. He saw that everything was shining with a bright white light (that rhymes!). He believed he was in the heaven he heard people talking about on sundays on their way to the church. He realized that he no longer felt hunger, thirst of required sleep. Inside the building he found a few torn books laying around. He started reading the books. He spent over 6 years inside the monastery reading the books, never needing to get out of the building. After having read all the books, he believed to have been chosen by God to cleanse the world. He came out of the white coccoon that surrounded the melt-down area. Once outside, he began to "cleanse the world" as he believed was his task. He destroyed everything he believed went against God's Law according to the books he read.
Glory - Gabriel releases some of the energy inside him, which also creates the effect a sort of halo around him. The energy affects his surroundings. Plants mutate and bloom, animals cower away, and humans are disoriented, some possibly experiencing amnesia.

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Claire
- a girl with a strange ability. Referred to as clairvoyance , (hence her name). Her ability is defined as "the ability to see clearly", or the ability to gain information about an object, person, location or physical event through means other than the known human senses, a form of extra-sensory perception. When she activates her ability, she senses everything around her. She can see every angle of an area at once, she can see invisible things, she can sense every single movement happening around her, even atoms and cells moving. She can hear the faintest sounds and even read a persons mind. She can read a persons movement before they even do it. Her ability is very similar to Mary's darkworld, when she activates her ability, her surroundings become dark, and a red aura slightly illuminates the area. Her body becomes pure energy, and has a red color. In this state, the area surrounding her becomes her world, as she knows everything that happens, before it even happens. Claire has a special outfit, created by scientists, to monitor her ability. It also allows them to see, hear, and record whatever she senses. In this sense, she is hooked up to their database, making her the ideal spy.
  • Her outfit is as follows: a pair of large headphones, which she rarely, if ever, takes off. A belt and a leg brace that monitor her body functions, and record what happens when she activates clairvoyance.
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Havoc Recoil

Real name: Havek Reekel (I know!)
Age: 19
Abilities: weapons expert, and a master of hand-to-hand combat.
Other:

He is a mercenary hired to attack the main group. He suffers from a slight Bipolar disorder, which causes him to switch moods frequently. He is an narcissist, this can be observed by the way he presents his card any chance he gets. He even presents it to his targets before he attacks/kills them.Oddly enough, he also has an inferiority complex. All these troubles seem to stem from the fact that his parents were usually occupied with their jobs, and he was often left under the care of his grandmother, who just slept all day.

He is a weapons expert, usually using his earnings to upgrade his arsenal. As his name might also imply, he is an extremely formidable opponent in hand-to-hand combat. His kicks are very powerful, for which he calls them recoil. His techniques are based around weaponry and martial arts.

He possesses a ship called the Gunslinger, which is very versatile. Inside it are his weapons and other possessions. The Gunslinger is a medium sized ship, with about 12 rooms. He also has 2 smaller ships, which he calls the Boomerang and the Bullet respectively. The boomerang is actually a fighting ship, equipped with hundreds of weapons. The bullet is a traveling ship, able to go at high speeds and execute sharp maneuvers. The bullet can also serve as a drill.

He tries several times to kill the group, but fails each time. Because of this, the group have come to think of him as a nuisance.

He has a certain code of honor, which is ironic as he is known to be a cheater who usually just looks out for himself. He cannot divulge the identity of his employer, and he does not question their motives. If he finds that the target is unreasonable, as in a child, he can refuse the offer.

He is a loner, and avoids working with others. He seems to know Klaus (another character) and actually fears him.

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  • Violet (Ultraviolet) -Work in Progress
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ultraviolet_light

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Moves and Techniques



I came up with some special moves, like, a technique unique to a person. This all sounds crazy and complicated, but it'll make sense once I illustrate it....eventually....probably.

Steph -------------------------------------------------

  • Diamond dust - A subtle technique at first, she freezes small particles of water in the air (her body releases cold), until these eventually form a fog. Once there is enough fog, she rapidly moves the particles, which being so small, can go through the pores in the skin, like bullets. Victims of this technique often die bleeding out, since the wounds are too small to cover, and the attack can cause thousands of wounds.
  • Sastruga - an advanced technique that requires a large amount of water. Steph manipulates the water, propelling it at high speeds. She freezes certain points, while the rest of the water remains liquid. The liquid water keeps moving, carrying along the ice. As the ice and water are moved in an irregular pattern, forming a sort of saw, that slices anything in its path.
  • Whiteout - Steph lowers the temperature in the area, creating a thick fog. If there is a lot of water in the air, she freezes the particles, making it impossible to see.
  • Tidavalanche (washout) - if there is a large amount of water, Steph can quickly freeze it into snow, and disperse it at high speed, like a tidal wave, in all directions.
  • Blizzard - requires a lot of humidity in the air, or a nearby body of water. Steph cools some of the water particles to extremely high levels, while leaving other normal. The cold particles interact with the regular temperature, creating a lot of pressure, and producing extremely strong winds. The cold particles are moved by the regular particles, resulting in a strong blizzard. (this makes sense, trust me, just sounds weird)
  • Waterspout - Similar to the blizzard, but must be performed on a large body of water. Steph moves water around at high speeds, and makes it rise, creating a tornado of water. The water moves at high speeds, taking and destroying anything in its path.
  • Winterspout - the same process applied to make the waterspout, but freezing the water. As the water freezes while it spins, it takes the form of long blades. As the winterspout moves, it instantly slices anything it comes in contact with.
  • Hydras - Hydras are two advanced water techniques, El nino and La nina. El nino is a serpent like dragon made out of water. It charges with a lot of force. La nina.
  • Hydras dance - An ultimate level technique, requires two aquakinetics. One creates El nino, the other one creates La Nina. Both water dragons then zig zag around each other.
  • Hydrosphere (Hypersphere) - Steph creates a ball of water around herself. While inside this ball, she can glide through water at very high speeds, as well as use more powerful techniques. First a vortex spins around her, then the ball is formed. Since the ball is water, non aquakinetics cannot stay inside too long, or they will drown.
  • Hypercane - Steph's most powerful technique. She concentrates a lot of water around her hand. The water spins around at high pressures, obliterating anything it manages to pull in.
  • Great Blue - a variant of the hypercane, but it is thrown instead of held. Steph concentrates water into a large ball. This ball is then thrown. When it touches something, it instantly bursts , flooding the area like a tsunami.
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Yadow
  • Ball Lightning - Yadow's most common technique, he focuses a lot of electricity into his hands, which compresses into a ball. Yadow can shoot the ball at high speeds by propelling it with another lightning bolt.
  • Thunderbolt - Yadow's standard technique, he shoots out a bolt of electricity, which is followed by a loud cracking sound it produces.
  • Re-strike - Yadow shoots out various bolts of lightning at high speeds at a single point, these strike in sequence, but it happens so fast it seems like it was a single powerful bolt.
  • Staccato - Klau's signature technique, which he eventually taught Yadow. A quick bolt of lightning that is very bright. All that is seen is a bright flash, followed by the bolt impacting. Due to the sheer speed and luminosity of the technique, witnesses cannot explain how it happened.
  • Discharge - Another technique created by Klaus. When Yadow touches an object, he sends out a wave of energy through it. The wave is seen traveling through the object. After the wave goes through the entire object, it explodes from the energy.
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Iban

Iban is a darkmatter user. His control, however, is limited to manipulating gravity. This means that he can technically also control light, making him both a dark and light energy user.

Dark Techniques: Although Iban can use both energies, he prefers using dark.
  • Momentum - Iban uses reverse gravity to repel himself from the air, pushing him away an allowing him to fly.
  • Darkstar - A ball of dark energy that acts exactly like a star, except it is neither cold or hot. Can be compared with Mary's "darkball" technique.
  • Protostar - A stronger version of the darkstar, characterized by some leaking dark matter that can be seen around it. It shakes a lot, since there is a lot of energy concentrated. It moves very fast.
  • Dark disc - a spinning disc of dark matter. Can be used as a saw, or throwable black hole.
  • Black Jet - Iban concentrates light and dark energy into a very condensed disk. He then fires the blast in a single direction. Works like a bazooka. The light energy is used to create more pressure, so it counts as a dark technique.
White techniques:
  • Cluster - A group of micro light energies brought together by some dark energy.
  • White hole - name aside, this is actually a powerful technique. It is the exact opposite of a black hole, in that instead of pulling in objects, it repels them.

Mixed: Iban's stronger attacks, however, result by mixing both dark and light energies.

  • Starquake - A ball, with light energy surrounded by dark energy. It works as a bomb. While the light energy may seem small, its actually a super concentrated amount. The dark energy suppresses it. When the ball makes contact, the dakr energy gets broken, and the light energy is released.
  • Bullet cluster - A mix of light and dark energy that seems to appear out of nowhere. Moves extremely fast, and when they penetrate (ha, ha) the dark energy spreads around the object, consuming it.
  • Paradox - A super powerful black hole, where dark energy and light energy are mixed together. The effects of this attack are completely random, and its effect varies. It may phase through an object, or destroy an entire area. It could also create a dark portal.
  • Quantum -A ball of dark energy as well as light energy.

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Klaus

Klaus is a master electrokinetic. He created numerous techniques, some of which he taught Yadow.

Klaus has two kinds of techniques. Yellow techniques are those that use yellow electricity. These are pure electricity, which burns the object it touches, as well as shocks. Blue techniques use blue electricity. Blue techniques are more powerful, and instad of burning, they simply destroy what it touches. Blue electricity does not shock.

Yellow Techniques:

  • Thunderbolt - the standard electric technique, shoots out yellow electricity followed by a cracking sound.
  • Ball Lightning - focuses a lot of electricity into his hands, which compresses into a ball. Klaus shoost the ball at high speeds by propelling it with another lightning bolt.
  • Re-strike - Klaus shoots out various bolts of lightning at high speeds at a single point, these strike in sequence, but it happens so fast it seems like it was a single powerful bolt.
  • Staccato - Klau's signature technique, which he eventually taught Yadow. A quick bolt of lightning that is very bright. All that is seen is a bright flash, followed by the bolt impacting. Due to the sheer speed and luminosity of the technique, witnesses cannot explain how it happened.
  • Discharge - Another technique created by Klaus. When he touches an object, he sends out a wave of energy through it. The wave is seen traveling through the object. After the wave goes through the entire object, it explodes from the energy.
  • Ukkonen - A huge bolt of lightning, that acts like a snake
  • Blinding light - a sheet of lightning, can be used as a shield.
Blue Techniques:

  • Bolt from the blue - Blue lightning bolts that can seem to come out of nowhere. Klaus can fire blue bolts like a bullet.
  • Blue starter - a small blue electric field. Can be used as a "push", in that the force pushes back objects or people.
  • Blue Jet - A powerful, short blast of blue electricity. It is much more powerful than a bolt from the blue, and is Klaus' strongest small scale attack.
  • Gigantic Jets - The Gigantic Jets, also known as the Thundergods, are Klaus' most powerful techniques. There are three Thundergods: Zeus, Thor and Indra. Depending on the thundergod used, Klaus' staff will take different shapes.
1. Indra - God of War and chaos. Indra signifies war. It is a huge field of different electricities moving around. It is the weakest of the three thundergods, but it covers the largest area. When performing this attack, Klaus' staff becomes a vajra.

2. Thor - God of the Warriors. It signifies the essence of a warrior. It is a gigantic impact of electricity that strikes like a hammer. It is the middle thundergod, and the most balanced, as it covers a fairly large area while still dealing a lot of damage. When performing this attack, Klaus' staff becomes a large hammer.

3. Zeus - King of the Gods. It signifies absolute power. It is a single, destructive lightning bolt. Could be compared to a waterfall, as the electricity keeps falling from the skies for a few seconds. It is completely destructive, creating a crater several miles deep where it impacts. After the attack, a thunderstorm is left, which lasts for a few days. When performing this attack, Klaus' staff becomes an actual lightning bolt, which he can hold and not be burned.




Klaus has a scepter made of solid gold. Using his electricity, he can shape it by heating and melting it. After giving them a shape, he uses it as a conductor for his energy. The scepter has 6 diamons rings across it.

Klaus has a total of 3 electric weapons:
  • Mjolnir - Klaus charges the metal rod, focusing the most energy on the top, shaping it like a hammer. When it strikes, it sends out a powerful wave of electricity, along with a loud booming sound.
  • Vajra - (meaning thunderbolt diamond) Klaus charges the metal rod, making a strange shape on each end. It is a short metal weapon that has the symbolic nature of a diamond (it can cut any substance but not be cut itself) and that of the thunderbolt (irresistible force). The diamond rings end up on both ends
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Angel

  • Flamethrower - Angel's standard attack, he releases a stream of fire from his arms, legs, or mouth.
  • Firestorm - An advances attack, Angel raises the temperature around him as high as possible by creating huge fires in all directions. When the fire reaches enough intensity, the heat affects the wind, creating a whirlwind of fire. The temperatures inside the whirlwind are very hot, while flames fan out of the whirlwind, spreading the fire and making the storm even stronger.
  • Inferno - A stronger version of the firestorm, angel creates flames up to 20 feet tall, which are then taken by the whirlwind, resulting in a flaming tornado. (also called Fire devil)
  • Smoulder - smoulder is the state of Angels body in which his body heats up, but does not burst into flames. When he raises his temperature, his body begins to glow red.
  • Combustion - combustion is when Angels body heat becomes so intense, he bursts into flames. Angels body does not burn, but the air around him does.
  • Blaze - Blaze is when Angel sets his surroundings on fire.
  • Whitefire - Angel's hottest possible temperatures turn his flames white.
  • Great Red - copied from Steph's Great Blue, angel concentrates heat into a ball. He throws the ball, which explodes into a huge heat wave which burns the area and also creates the inferno technique.
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Plasmana
Plasmana is a fusion between Yadow and Angel. He is one of the most powerful characters. His name comes from his element, plasma, and mana, the life energy

  • Plasma ball - Plasmana's standard attack. He creates a ball of plasma that floats on his hand. After a few minutes, an aura can be seen around it. Even though the ball hovers on his hand, he can throw it. The ball never comes in contact with an object. When its going to collide, it phases through the object, dissapearing inside. After a few seconds, the object bursts into a flame like aura, which burns about 10x the rate of fire.
  • Supernova - a modified version of the plasma ball, it contains massive amounts of energy held together by the plasma's aura. Sort of like a bomb, it is thrown, and afterwards expands quickly, obliterating anything it touches. A 6 inch orb can expand to 5 miles.
  • Hypernova - An extremely strong attack, he focuses all of his energy into two supernovas, one on each hand. One is made of plasma, and one is made of mana. ( The plasma ball is purple, the mana ball is blue) He clashes the two, which unite into a single ball. It has the power of about 50-100 supernovas
  • Aurora - A strange aura that is formed when Plasmana is charging up. It doesn't have any real effect, its simply an effect, excess energy from Plasmana's body.
  • Pulse - Plasmana releases a pulse of plasma energy that can have many uses. It can be used as a radar, to measure energy, and as a stunning attack.
  • Quark - Accelerated energy, when thrown, energy bounces around randomly, destroying anything it touches, even allies.
  • Big Bang - Plasmana's strongest attack, as well as one of the strongest techniques in existence. Plasmana focuses all of his energy, and then releases it all at once, unleashing a super destructive blast that stretches for miles.
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Mary

  • Corona - Called a Darkball by Mary, it is a strange effect, a ball of darkmatter surrounded by aurora. Similar to the plasma ball, it phases through an object, and later releases energy. The difference being that instead of exploding and burning the object like the plasma ball, it puts the object in a state of dark. "Darkworld" as Mary calls it, is actually a sort of alternate dimension. Since Mary can control Darkmatter, she can do anything to the object or person trapped inside. On our dimension, all we see is a dark orb surrounding and covering the object or person attacked. Plasmana can create a similar effect, but he cannot create another dimension, simply alter ours.
  • Darkflow - Mary can summon some dark matter from Darkworld, and use it as a weapon. The Darkflow looks like a black gas. It cannot be touched, but it can consume anything. Anything covered entirely by dark matter is instantly transported to Dark World.
Darkworld - Darkworld is the alternate dimension which Mary can summon. Its a place made entirely out of Darkmatter. Mary can alter everything in this world. Time does not follow a sequence in this world. A year in Darkworld sometimes equals a minute in the real world, while a minute could equal a millenium. When Mary goes to Darkworld, a dark sphere stays where she was. This was because Mary cannot simply take dark matter out of dark world, she merely exchanges places with some energy. If Mary brings two people into darkworld, there will be two spheres of dark matter with their exact mass where they were.

Not much is known about Darkworld. In all the time Mary has spent inside it, she has never encountered anyone, or anything. In darkworld, light is negative. There is no oxygen in darkworld, yet people can survive in there because it feeds on their life energy. This means that a person can survive in darkworld, at the expense of having thir lifespan shortened.

Non darkenergy wielders cannot spend too much time in Darkworld, as it feeds on their life energy. Ivan, being a darkmatter user, can survive in it, and can alter it to an extent. Plasmana has a higher resistance in Darkworld due to his element, as well as having massive amounts of energy to spare. Valeria could technically survive indefinetly in Darkworld being a ghost child, but she cannot control dark matter. Inside Darkworld, Mary has much more techniques than in the real world.
  • Shadowplay - Mary creates shadow people, that can do her bidding. In combat, they can fight, or be used to disorient an opponent.
  • Time Out - Mary can create sections, subworlds, inside Darkworld. These subworlds are only available to her, and only she can create/reveal/close them. It can be used to trap someone in the Darkworld. Later in the story, a shadowbeing which was trapped in a subworld escapes, and manages to go into the real world through Mary. It tries to cover the entire planet in darkness.
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Combo Moves

These are attacks done by mixing several people's abilities

  • Iced Lightning - Steph and Yadow/ Since water conducts electricity, Yadow can blast Steph with some electricity, and if she attacks with water or ice, this passes along the charge. Usually done as a trick attack.

  • Thundersnow - Steph and Yadow/ a more advanced version of Iced Lightning, Steph creates a storm by creating clouds and changing the temperatures, causing it to snow. Yadow then charges the clouds with a massive amount of electricity. When it starts to snow, each snowflake, which contains a large amount of electricity, can shock whatever it touches. If the charge is strong enough, the snowflakes might even explode on contact from being overloaded with energy.

  • Burning Light - Yadow and Angel/ Angel and Yadow both shoot out a blast of their specific element in a spinning manner. These two blasts spin around each other, forming into a single bolt. It shows up as a flame surrounded by electricity. On impact, both elements clash, creating a huge explosion at high temperatures. It is characterized by the fact that it does not make a sound until it comes in contact with something.

  • Supercell - Klaus, Steph and Plasmana (Yadow and Angel)/ An extremely powerful attack, Steph creates a massive cloud that rises up like a mushroom. Klaus and Plasmana supercharge it with energy, causing it to overload, and fall back. The top of the clod starts to descend, as more water is blasted up, sort of like a water fountain. Inside the cloud, the ice moving around creates even more energy. When it cannot contain anymore energy, the cloud releases a single megablast of energy directly below it, completely annhialating the area.

  • Blue Jet - Ivan, Angel, Yadow/ The process used to create Burning Light, but when Ivan adds a small vortex in the middle, the two energies, fire an electricity, merge, along with Ivans own dark matter energy, into a spinning blue bolt, the shape of a cone, travelling at high speeds.

  • Migma - (This is bullshit...)Migma is the process through which Plasmana was created. When Yadow and Angel both charge themselves with their respective energies, Ivan can create a vortex that breaks down their atoms, like a centrifuge. The vortex forceably fuses the atoms. If their energies synch up, the atoms arrange themselves as a single entity. Meaning that a perfect fusion between the two is created, resulting in the being Plasmana.

I also came up with a concept, Plasflame and Plaslight. Thats when Plasmana chooses one of the elements that make him. Plasflame is plasmana with red striped in his hair. He uses blue flames, and is impulsive, like angel. Plaslight uses purple electricity, and is cocky like Yadow.

Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Kutsorona

Im designing those new characters, but with my wrist hurt, i cant really draw em yet.

Just a Quick Note: A scene came to mind, when the character Kutsorona is introduced. The first time he shows off his powers, we see a close up, and in slow motion we see the flames rising from his body, followed by a quick burst of fire, that engulfs him. After the fire clears up, we see that his hair changes from black to orange/red.

I also came up with a group. Its.... a weird group. I think theres gonna be 5. They met under unusual circumstances, but they all had one thing in common: they were different. They each adopted a name, fitting to their circumstances. Not much is known about them, their stories, goals and powers are a mystery.

  • Psycho -Dont be fooled by his name, this young sadist is actually quite a gentleman. He politely asks how a person would like to be gutted. He respectfully asks permission before brutally slicing a person in half, and then apologizes for making a mess. Psycho as he is called, is completely loyal to Darko.
  • Sicko - A truly disturbing young man. He dresses in a surgeon/emo inspired fashion, sporting elegant clothes under a blood soaked apron, gloves and a surgical mask. He carries around a large blood soaked Butcher knife, as well as some small rusty knives. His story is the darkest one. His name fits him well, he finds pleasure in gore and sexuality. His activities include mass murders and rape. He doesn't seem to have any actual gifts, he is merely a skilled fighter. So many adjectives can be used to describe him: Sadist, sociopath, psychopath, and perhaps most unsettling, Masochist.
  • Darko - The most calm and collected of the group, considered the leader. He dresses in an elegant gothic style. He is the most mysterious of the group, and his motives are not clear. The rest of the group are loyal to him, and follow his word as law.
  • Schizo -"Madness" pretty much sums up this young man. He is a powerful telekenetic who, ironically, suffers from extreme schizophrenia. The severity of his condition is so high, that he must cover his right eye to avoid seeing mirages created by his mind, his left eye gauged out in one of his "moments" Shizo relies on his other senses. When he removes his blindfold, his mind starts warping what he sees, driving him insane, and showing him things that arent really there. This does not mean his other senses are immune though, just ask the voices that constantly ask him to kill, or the hands that reach from under the ground and try to drag him to hell. His telekenesis manifests his hallucinations into reality. He is constantly haunted by "demons" inside his head. Darko can somehow lessen the hallucinations, for which Schizo is eternally loyal to him.
  • Phobia and Panic - Two Ttwin sisters, presumed to be around 13. Phobia can tap into a persons mind and make them go through their worst fears and troubles. When Phobia enters a persons mind, they are locked, trapped inside their worst moments and fears. Panic can strike people with sudden attacks of intense anxiety, pain, fear, arousal and other psychological problems. Their powers manifest subconciously, resulting in that their mere presence causes discomfort in people. Prolonged exposure to them can cause madness. Panic was once raped by Sicko, who being a masochist, found pleasure in Panic's powers. This further traumatized the alread unstable girl, who lost all confidence and will. Phobia is the dominant of the two, usually having to make decisions for her sister.

Monday, June 29, 2009

Characters

First of all, I renamed the blog OTP: Experimental, and I shall use that name for the anime for now. Ill see the response it gets (from Ste-I mean....JEN DARKNIGHT, since shes pretty much my consultant on shit like this....)


OTP has a nice ring to it.... unlike all the other crap I had come up with. The :Experimental subtitle fits for two reasons, one, the characters ARE experiments, and two, I wanna try lots of things in this story.

From what I see, OTP has room for a lot of characters, and I keep coming up with more, so Im gonna try to fit in as many as I can. But I also dont want to overload it....this is hard. (thatswhatshesaid)

Im also trying to work out the major plots, but ive been working on Borderline mostly.


On with Characters:

These characters seem like mentors to our protagonists, but this was not my initial intention. They wont all be mentors, but they will influence their respective counterparts in some way.

* Klaus - Klaus is a 22 year old electrokinetic. He is one of the extremely few known electrokinetics. He has complete mastery of his powers, able to control enormous amounts of electricity with ease. Yadow looks to him for knowledge on how to control the power, but Klaus ignores him. In retrospect, hes..... kinda like Braulio! (O.O) HOLY CRAP! Hes the new Braulio!!!!
Yup......"Brawly" is gone. Klaus is the new guy. All is right with the world.

* Kutsorona - a 19 year old pyrokinetic with a bad attitude. Hes a total prankster, and enjoys making fun of others. Hes quite skilled, but can be easily fooled. He gets frustrated quickly if things dont go his way, ironically making him a hothead *laughs*

* Jack-o - 25 years old, and Kutsoronas brother. He is also a pyrokenetic, but is skilled in many other forms of combat. He is stronger and more skilled than Kutsorona, and constantly makes fun of him. He is very laid back and only acts when necessary. He likes to trick other people. He is an extremely powerful fighter, at Klaus' level. Jack is actually his second name, his first name is unknown. Also, no one except Kutsorona knows what the o stands for. His Initials are K.J., showing that his first name starts with a K as well.

I got some more, but im still working on em.

I also made some changes to Yadow's story.

As of now, hes a natural gifted, the artificial part being that he could not control his powers, hence the need for the regulator. One of the requirements for the regulator to work, was the replacement of blood with the lithanox. This enables Yadow to hold a charge. This is different to other electrokinetics, in that they can only produce electricity, and some can store it for a limited time. Yadow's situation allows him to store a large amount of electricity for an indefinite time. This makes sense so far, much better than my previous versions. Although, i WOULD like Yadow to have gotten his powers by pure accident, so thats still a possibility. The regulator is still going, all I want to change is the method by which he acquired the powers.


Also, the story still seems bland, Im thinking of a way to make it intersting, for example, Yadow didnt WANT his powers, and adding other stuff to the protagonists stories to make em more interesting. I also need them to have a goal, a place to get to.

Friday, June 19, 2009

Fiction's gotta make sense

Been thinking of the premise of the story. I retrospect, my justification for the artificial gifted kinda killed one of the most important parts of the story: How could a person born from a lab and such have an interesting personality? I spent all day thinking bout that, and came up with a solution: They werent born in a lab. They were regular children, just tampered with. This also allows me to better explain how the powers work. Science fiction doesn't have to make sense, just has to make you THINK it does.

Here I'll explain how the powers work in nature, and how they were replicated. (Descriptions taken from here as they sum them up in better words than I ever could.)


* Pyrokenesis - the creation and manipulation of Fire using the mind. The body is able to produce large amounts of heat that can be focused to set fire to air itself, and thus create small fire-balls etc.

With training, a person can make their flames hotter, turn into a human-torch, make fire into waves and streams and also create beams.

Known users:
  • Angel (artificial). Angels possessed a rare blood type, ideal for one of the Gifted Program's branches, pyrokenesis. He was entered in the program at 8 months old, while his body was still developing. His cells could be altered to work at a more accelerated rate than normal, producing large amounts of heat at will.

Aquakenesis - Aquakenesis is the the creation and manipulation of water using the mind. The body takes moisture as well as Hydrogen and Oxygen from the Atmosphere and allows the user to expell this through his/her pores. A side-effect of the ability is that the user can survive long periods of time without water.

If an experienced aquakenetic is close to or surrounded by water, he/she can manipulate the water. Some aquakenesis can also possess the ability of cryokenesis, which is the ability to collect water-vapour in the air and withdraw it's heat, causing an area of the user's body/ area near the user to be covered in ice/freeze.

Known users:

  • Steph (natural) - Steph is a skilled aquakenetic, also capable of cryokenesis.

Dark Matter Manipulation - Dark Matter is the mysterious matter that populates most of the universe, dark matter cannot be detected by most methods: it does not emit heat, cold, or radiation, and yet has numerous effects. Some people can unexplainedly control Dark matter, even summon it into existence.

There have been only 5 known cases of Dark Matter manipulation. Dark Matter manipulation is an ability believed to originate from Vampires, an extinct race , said to be the most powerful creatures on earth. Vampires are thought to be a myth, as there has been no evidence of these creatures.

Dark matter has various properties, it can change gravity, and even move through time and space.


Known Users:
  • Iban (natural)- He was born with limited control over Dark Matter, killing his parents and most of his neighborhood at age 5 by accidentally creating a black hole that obliterated everything in the area. He was entered in the Gifted Program at age 5, and was tampered with to suppress his powers. While it is unknown how he controls it, it was learned that his thoughts had a role in its control. He can summon dark matter to alter gravity, and can to an extent create portals that absorb blasts, impacts, or objects.
  • Mary (artificial)- Mary was injected with Vampire DNA taken from a fossil before birth



Mental powers - The ability varies, a user can have the ability of persuasion, illusion, telepathy, etc... or various at once. It is the most sought after power, it is rare, and even rarer is a person who can use it effectively. Most telekenetics don't know they possess the ability, or simply dont know how to use it.

Types of mental powers:

* Persuasion - This ability allows the user to make another sane person follow their commands. Use of the ability usually involves a darkening of the eyes and a grainy voice. The power can be resisted by strong minds and it also depends on the confidence of the user. This ability allows the user to make another sane person follow their commands. The power can be resisted by strong minds and it also depends on the confidence of the user.

* Telekenesis - Telekenesis is the ability to move objects with the mind. The ability usually requires small physical movements like pointing and sweeping for accuracy. The strenght of telekenesis depends solely on the mind. If one is focused and clear minded, ones telekenetic powers are stronger. If a person is distracted or their mind is clouded, their telekenesis weakens.

* Illusion - llusion is the ability to alter light patterns with the mind and disguise physical objects with complex illusions. It takes a skilled and strong-minded person to see through these Illusions, but a skilled user can make his/her images in-penetrable. The ability also allows the user to manipulate the sight of others. The user does not actually alter light itself (for that would make it Elemental) but alters the way targets percive light.

* Telepathy - elepathy allows the user to controll the minds of others, altering their perceptions and being able to read their minds. They can also plant thoughts in peoples heads and find out information about their genetics.

Note: This ability allows the user to reach into the minds of others to find out how to use their powers. This only works for Mental powers.



Electrical Manipulation - Electrical Manipulation is the creation, manipulation and absorbtion of Electricity. Includes many abilities, such as being able to absorb Electricity and create it. The body develops a new type of cell that attracts and repels Electrons, and large focusses of these allow the user to take total controll over Electricity in many different ways. It can be made into force fields, bolts,arcs, and balls as well as being able to seperate atomic bonds and fuse them. The body will also work as a kind of electromagnet over conducters.

  • Yadow
Regular boy, grew up in a midclass town. At age 8 was abducted by the Government. Apparently he possesses a rare blood type, which was suitable for a Government Project. He was part of the Artificial Gifted Program. His body was slowly tampered with.

Electrical manipulation is also a tricky ability to recreate. The body is only used to a small amount of electricity, and cannot simply get used to it, as opposed to cryonekesis and pyrokenesis.

Due to previous failures, some special steps were taken to ensure control on the subject Yadow.
First, he was periodically injected with a substance which included elements like lithium and cadmium. This was done to make his body accept it. At age 11 his heart was replaced with a powerful electrical regulator. This regulator was wired to his brain. During the surgery, his blood was drained and replaced with a stronger batch of the substance he was previously injected with. A "battery" was placed next to the regulator, and some metal was attached to the bones in his fingers, elbows and cranium. The surgery laster a total of 60 hours, almost 3 days. After the surgery, he was placed in a coma for 3 months. When he awoke, he short circuited the entire medical wing of the building. It was clear that the operation was a success, Yadow was the first documented case of a successful artificially created Bioelectrical Human.

The regulator and the lithanox replaced his heart and blood respectively. Yadow was now a human battery. The lithanox is a substance that can contain a massive amount of electricity. His blood cells adapted to the lithanox in place of blood. The cells now fitted the requirements for electrical manipulation, as the lithanox altered them, allowing them to attract and repel Electrons. The regulator acts as a heart, charging and pumping the lithanox through his body, providing energy for for his regular bodily functions, but allowing him to manipulate electricity. Since the regulator is wired to his brain, Yadow can indicate the amount of energy he wants it to provide. When he commands it to release a high amount of energy, it is drawn to the metal in his arms, which then discharge, effectively allowing him to shoot electrical blasts. These blasts can either be released concentrated, to deal greater damage, or dispersed, to cover a large area. Although the generator allows Yadow to create his own electricity, the amount it can generate in a day is limited. The battery placed next to his stomach allows him to store a large amount of electricity, either from the regulator (which takes or releases energy from the cells), or from an external source. Yadow always keeps the battery full, in case he gets exhausted or he reaches his limit, so he can use the stored energy.

Although his body has been conditioned to withstand electrical currents constantly going through his body, it can only take so much. His body is used to the amount of energy the generator produces, but it can be damaged by an external source of electricity if it has a higher voltage.