First of all, I renamed the blog OTP: Experimental, and I shall use that name for the anime for now. Ill see the response it gets (from Ste-I mean....JEN DARKNIGHT, since shes pretty much my consultant on shit like this....)
OTP has a nice ring to it.... unlike all the other crap I had come up with. The :Experimental subtitle fits for two reasons, one, the characters ARE experiments, and two, I wanna try lots of things in this story.
From what I see, OTP has room for a lot of characters, and I keep coming up with more, so Im gonna try to fit in as many as I can. But I also dont want to overload it....this is hard. (thatswhatshesaid)
Im also trying to work out the major plots, but ive been working on Borderline mostly.
On with Characters:
These characters seem like mentors to our protagonists, but this was not my initial intention. They wont all be mentors, but they will influence their respective counterparts in some way.
* Klaus - Klaus is a 22 year old electrokinetic. He is one of the extremely few known electrokinetics. He has complete mastery of his powers, able to control enormous amounts of electricity with ease. Yadow looks to him for knowledge on how to control the power, but Klaus ignores him. In retrospect, hes..... kinda like Braulio! (O.O) HOLY CRAP! Hes the new Braulio!!!!
Yup......"Brawly" is gone. Klaus is the new guy. All is right with the world.
* Kutsorona - a 19 year old pyrokinetic with a bad attitude. Hes a total prankster, and enjoys making fun of others. Hes quite skilled, but can be easily fooled. He gets frustrated quickly if things dont go his way, ironically making him a hothead *laughs*
* Jack-o - 25 years old, and Kutsoronas brother. He is also a pyrokenetic, but is skilled in many other forms of combat. He is stronger and more skilled than Kutsorona, and constantly makes fun of him. He is very laid back and only acts when necessary. He likes to trick other people. He is an extremely powerful fighter, at Klaus' level. Jack is actually his second name, his first name is unknown. Also, no one except Kutsorona knows what the o stands for. His Initials are K.J., showing that his first name starts with a K as well.
I got some more, but im still working on em.
I also made some changes to Yadow's story.
As of now, hes a natural gifted, the artificial part being that he could not control his powers, hence the need for the regulator. One of the requirements for the regulator to work, was the replacement of blood with the lithanox. This enables Yadow to hold a charge. This is different to other electrokinetics, in that they can only produce electricity, and some can store it for a limited time. Yadow's situation allows him to store a large amount of electricity for an indefinite time. This makes sense so far, much better than my previous versions. Although, i WOULD like Yadow to have gotten his powers by pure accident, so thats still a possibility. The regulator is still going, all I want to change is the method by which he acquired the powers.
Also, the story still seems bland, Im thinking of a way to make it intersting, for example, Yadow didnt WANT his powers, and adding other stuff to the protagonists stories to make em more interesting. I also need them to have a goal, a place to get to.
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