A character I've mentioned before, Claire.
Claire was inspired by this picture
Claire is a young girl with an unknown ability. Claire is a mysterious young girl. Her real name and past are unknown, as she never speaks, so it is unknown if she even can, but it seems that she can understand people talking. .. She was taken into the Gift Program at some point at around age 8. At first, it is believed she has clairvoyance, which is a heightening of all senses, hence the name given to her, Claire.
Claire is extremely powerful, perhaps even stronger than Klaus or Pao, although it seems that Pao can suppress her abilities.
The people who caught here, not related to the company, wish to use her abilities.
When Claire activates her power, her whole body turns into energy. Her body turns red, and time seems to slow around her. She can move at super high speed, her strenght is multiplied, and she can release powerful energy blasts. Claire cannot fully control her powers. If she had full control, it is entirely possible that she would be the strongest character in the series.
As ive mentioned before, she wears large headphones, a machine belt, as well as a machine bracelet of her left hand. These machines monitor her body functions and can either suppress her powers, or make it easier for her to use them.
I came up with a scene.
I dont have anything before it, so some stuff might not make sense. This happens in a rocky desert, perhaps not far from a city.
Anyway, Claire descends at high speeds from the sky, through the clouds. (Sort of like Naota in Fooly Cooly in the final episode) She heads straight for Klaus. At full force, she kicks him, while still in the air. Klaus is able to block the kick, at the amazement of others. Claire continues attacking, still hovering a few feet off the ground. At one point she opens her mouth, which was not visible since she had activated her powers. Tearing it open as if it was sewn shut, she opens her mouth and shoots out a strong blast, which knocks Klaus back. He gets back up just as she strikes again, blocking a punch. Each clash sends out a powerful shockwave. Klaus tries to land a punch, but Claire disappears just as he is about to hit. She instantly appears behind him, and from below, does an uppercut. Klaus is hit, but manages to get back.
Yadow tries to attack Claire, but she easily moves out of the way, which cause Yadow to hit Klaus. Klaus blocks the shot, but is distracted, and Claire manages to punch him again. Angel blows fire, but once again Claire moves out of the way, and Klaus' coat catches fire. He quickly removes the jacket. "Dammit! Stop it!" "We're just trying to help, you jerk!" "Well youre failing miserably!"
Klaus dodges a punch from Claire and shoots lightning at Yadow and Angel, pushing them away.
Claire begins to glow more, a sign that she is further enhancing her senses. Claire disappears. Suddenly Klaus seems to be hit from every direction at once, and in just 3 seconds is very bruised. Claire slows down a bit, and now she is visible while still hitting Klaus. He manages to block some shots, but she is too quick.
Suddenly, Claire appears standing still next to Klaus. She does not strike. She seems almost frozen. (No steph, you didnt do anything) Claire suddenly flinches in pain as some energy shoots out of her. Although she still does not talk or scream, its clear that she is in pain. She flinches a few more times, shooting energy randomly. Then we see Pao in the distance. Pao is somehow able to surpress Claire's powers. Since Pao's powers are mental, they have nothing to do with the senses, so Claire does not notice that Pao is attacking her. After a few seconds, Claire is knocked out, and returns to normal. As Claire lays on the ground unconcious, two men take Claire and carry her away. Klaus and Pao stare seriously at each other, and Pao teleports away, and takes the two men and Claire.
Saturday, August 15, 2009
Wednesday, August 12, 2009
Beginnings
Still having some trouble creating a beginning for the story.
I dislike the government idea more and more each day, so for now, its a company.
Same thing, the company works with natural and artificial gifted. The whole gifted stuff is secret, hidden from the general public. It's a huuuge indoor facility. They have grounds and everything.
Yadow
Mark (Angel)
Steph
Mary
The story begins with Yadow training in one of the facilities. When the staff go away for a bit, he decides to explore around. He climbs a fence and goes to another ground.
He starts attacking some of the obstacles, and while jumping, a young man comes from the air and kicks Yadow down. Yadow falls to the ground and rolls a few times. The young man lands and gets in a fighting pose. His arms suddenly burst into flames, yet he seems ok.
On the floor, Yadow: Hey! What the fuck is wrong with you?! Why the hell did you kick me?!
The young man remains silent. Just who the fuck do you think you a- In that moment, the young man charges again. Yadow crawls backwards as the man punches the ground, which starts burning. When the young man has Yadow cornered H-hey...I think we got off on the wrong foot. C-cant we just be friends? The young man stood silently. Yadow braced himself, its obvious he was not going to be spared. Ok!, the young man said in an overly cheery tone. Yadow stared at him for a bit, questioning his true intentions. The young man extended his arm Need some help? The young man helped Yadow back up, then let him go mid-way, causing Yadow to fall to the floor. The young man laughed. Ahahaha!!! Ok-ok Im sorry! The young man extended his arm once again. Yadow grabbed his hand, and was let go once more. AHAHAHAHA!!!! Its even funnier the second time!! Phew, ok Im sorry, now for real.
Yadow denied and stood up on his own. I'm Mark. I'm Yadow.
Your arms....What happened to your arms? They were on fire a minute ago! Arent you burnt? Yeah. So? So? How did you do that?! What do you mean how did I do that? It's easy, just like this! The young man burst into flames. Yadow jumped back for a bit, scared that something might have happened to Mark, but then he noticed that Mark was unharmed, and that the flames did not consume him.
Wow! That's pretty cool. Yea, I am. Yadow stood silent for a few moments. So, you cant do that?
No. Huh. That's pretty lame. Hey! I can do something a thousand times better! Oh yea? Yadow took a fighting pose and started building up energy. What? Do you have to poo or something? Cuz theres a bathroom over th.... No! Just wait will ya! This takes some time. All right, but if you toot, Im outta here.... Both stood silently. Is this gonna take much longer, cuz....? *sigh* Dammit! I thought I had this down! It worked fine an hour ago! Maybe it's just- In this moment, a large explosion occured. Mark was pushed back.
Yadow was now surrounded by electricity, glowing and burning some of the grass. Huh? Told ya its awesome! Mark stared, in a thinking pose. Meh, kinda sucks. What?! Yadow stopped glowing, and the electricity faded. This is way more awesome than your stupid fire! Nah. Mine's cooler. The two looked at each other with a defiant look. So you think youre better than me?! , both of them yelled out.
Well I bet I can destroy that tree! Yadow threw a thunderbolt at a tree, which instantly burned down. Big deal, I can burn down all those trees. Mark ran towards a group of trees, and blew flames out of his mouth, burning down the trees. Oh yea? Well I can break down that wall!! Yadow pointed to a far away wall and started running towards it. NOT IF I DO IT FIRST!!! Mark raced past Yadow and smashed through the wall. First one to destroy the lights! Yadow jumped on some of the rubble from the wall and started blowing up the lights. Mark turned back and did the same.
This went on for a few other competitions, and the two ended up on another part of the Company.
The two young men were laying on the grass, burnt and bruised. I totally won! You did not! You only did like 3! I took down all the rest!
The shot then changes to a large room. It is practically empty, save for a couch in the middle. A young man was apparently sleeping while sitting on the couch. A door slid open, and a man came in.
While the group was walking around, a thunderstorn started brewing. This is a setup for Klaus. He was out training with the lightning. Yadow also tries to fight lightning, and is knocked on his ass, severely hurt. Lots of flashes. One big flash happens, and a lightningbolt hits right in front of the group. A large flash is seen, followed by thunder. Everything stays white The group thinks they got hit by the lightning bolt. As it clears up, we see Klaus, who had deflected the lightning bolt.
The group talks to him, but he simply runs off, jumps over the bridge and keeps running.
Well nice to meet you too.... The rain got more intense, and the group ran for cover under the old large bridge. Couldn't you stop the rain or something?! Well excuse me if I was distracted by a guy taking a fricking thunderbolt that was about to hit us. Why didn't YOU stop it? Maybe I did... Who the hell was that guy, anyway? He stopped the lightning from hitting us, and he was like nothing happened... Maybe hes an electro too? They told me there are no other electrokinetics... They also told you to kill people, didn't they?
The rain lasted for a while, so the group just stayed under the building, sitting and talking. Yadow was sitting and leaning against the wall. Angel was running around and backflipping off the walls. Steph was in the border of the bridge, manipulating the rainwater falling off the old bridge.
There's all kinds of people out there. People that powerful. I thought I was strong.... Meh, you'll get better. Maybe some day you might even last a minute against me. I could SO beat you! Well I can beat both of you with three arms tied behind my back! You only have two arms.... I never said they were MY arms.... The camera zooms away as the friends bicker and joke around.
I dislike the government idea more and more each day, so for now, its a company.
Same thing, the company works with natural and artificial gifted. The whole gifted stuff is secret, hidden from the general public. It's a huuuge indoor facility. They have grounds and everything.
Yadow
Mark (Angel)
Steph
Mary
The story begins with Yadow training in one of the facilities. When the staff go away for a bit, he decides to explore around. He climbs a fence and goes to another ground.
He starts attacking some of the obstacles, and while jumping, a young man comes from the air and kicks Yadow down. Yadow falls to the ground and rolls a few times. The young man lands and gets in a fighting pose. His arms suddenly burst into flames, yet he seems ok.
On the floor, Yadow: Hey! What the fuck is wrong with you?! Why the hell did you kick me?!
The young man remains silent. Just who the fuck do you think you a- In that moment, the young man charges again. Yadow crawls backwards as the man punches the ground, which starts burning. When the young man has Yadow cornered H-hey...I think we got off on the wrong foot. C-cant we just be friends? The young man stood silently. Yadow braced himself, its obvious he was not going to be spared. Ok!, the young man said in an overly cheery tone. Yadow stared at him for a bit, questioning his true intentions. The young man extended his arm Need some help? The young man helped Yadow back up, then let him go mid-way, causing Yadow to fall to the floor. The young man laughed. Ahahaha!!! Ok-ok Im sorry! The young man extended his arm once again. Yadow grabbed his hand, and was let go once more. AHAHAHAHA!!!! Its even funnier the second time!! Phew, ok Im sorry, now for real.
Yadow denied and stood up on his own. I'm Mark. I'm Yadow.
Your arms....What happened to your arms? They were on fire a minute ago! Arent you burnt? Yeah. So? So? How did you do that?! What do you mean how did I do that? It's easy, just like this! The young man burst into flames. Yadow jumped back for a bit, scared that something might have happened to Mark, but then he noticed that Mark was unharmed, and that the flames did not consume him.
Wow! That's pretty cool. Yea, I am. Yadow stood silent for a few moments. So, you cant do that?
No. Huh. That's pretty lame. Hey! I can do something a thousand times better! Oh yea? Yadow took a fighting pose and started building up energy. What? Do you have to poo or something? Cuz theres a bathroom over th.... No! Just wait will ya! This takes some time. All right, but if you toot, Im outta here.... Both stood silently. Is this gonna take much longer, cuz....? *sigh* Dammit! I thought I had this down! It worked fine an hour ago! Maybe it's just- In this moment, a large explosion occured. Mark was pushed back.
Yadow was now surrounded by electricity, glowing and burning some of the grass. Huh? Told ya its awesome! Mark stared, in a thinking pose. Meh, kinda sucks. What?! Yadow stopped glowing, and the electricity faded. This is way more awesome than your stupid fire! Nah. Mine's cooler. The two looked at each other with a defiant look. So you think youre better than me?! , both of them yelled out.
Well I bet I can destroy that tree! Yadow threw a thunderbolt at a tree, which instantly burned down. Big deal, I can burn down all those trees. Mark ran towards a group of trees, and blew flames out of his mouth, burning down the trees. Oh yea? Well I can break down that wall!! Yadow pointed to a far away wall and started running towards it. NOT IF I DO IT FIRST!!! Mark raced past Yadow and smashed through the wall. First one to destroy the lights! Yadow jumped on some of the rubble from the wall and started blowing up the lights. Mark turned back and did the same.
This went on for a few other competitions, and the two ended up on another part of the Company.
The two young men were laying on the grass, burnt and bruised. I totally won! You did not! You only did like 3! I took down all the rest!
The shot then changes to a large room. It is practically empty, save for a couch in the middle. A young man was apparently sleeping while sitting on the couch. A door slid open, and a man came in.
While the group was walking around, a thunderstorn started brewing. This is a setup for Klaus. He was out training with the lightning. Yadow also tries to fight lightning, and is knocked on his ass, severely hurt. Lots of flashes. One big flash happens, and a lightningbolt hits right in front of the group. A large flash is seen, followed by thunder. Everything stays white The group thinks they got hit by the lightning bolt. As it clears up, we see Klaus, who had deflected the lightning bolt.
The group talks to him, but he simply runs off, jumps over the bridge and keeps running.
Well nice to meet you too.... The rain got more intense, and the group ran for cover under the old large bridge. Couldn't you stop the rain or something?! Well excuse me if I was distracted by a guy taking a fricking thunderbolt that was about to hit us. Why didn't YOU stop it? Maybe I did... Who the hell was that guy, anyway? He stopped the lightning from hitting us, and he was like nothing happened... Maybe hes an electro too? They told me there are no other electrokinetics... They also told you to kill people, didn't they?
The rain lasted for a while, so the group just stayed under the building, sitting and talking. Yadow was sitting and leaning against the wall. Angel was running around and backflipping off the walls. Steph was in the border of the bridge, manipulating the rainwater falling off the old bridge.
There's all kinds of people out there. People that powerful. I thought I was strong.... Meh, you'll get better. Maybe some day you might even last a minute against me. I could SO beat you! Well I can beat both of you with three arms tied behind my back! You only have two arms.... I never said they were MY arms.... The camera zooms away as the friends bicker and joke around.
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