Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Beginnings

Still having some trouble creating a beginning for the story.

I dislike the government idea more and more each day, so for now, its a company.

Same thing, the company works with natural and artificial gifted. The whole gifted stuff is secret, hidden from the general public. It's a huuuge indoor facility. They have grounds and everything.

Yadow
Mark (Angel)
Steph
Mary



The story begins with Yadow training in one of the facilities. When the staff go away for a bit, he decides to explore around. He climbs a fence and goes to another ground.

He starts attacking some of the obstacles, and while jumping, a young man comes from the air and kicks Yadow down. Yadow falls to the ground and rolls a few times. The young man lands and gets in a fighting pose. His arms suddenly burst into flames, yet he seems ok.

On the floor, Yadow: Hey! What the fuck is wrong with you?! Why the hell did you kick me?!
The young man remains silent. Just who the fuck do you think you a- In that moment, the young man charges again. Yadow crawls backwards as the man punches the ground, which starts burning. When the young man has Yadow cornered H-hey...I think we got off on the wrong foot. C-cant we just be friends? The young man stood silently. Yadow braced himself, its obvious he was not going to be spared. Ok!, the young man said in an overly cheery tone. Yadow stared at him for a bit, questioning his true intentions. The young man extended his arm Need some help? The young man helped Yadow back up, then let him go mid-way, causing Yadow to fall to the floor. The young man laughed. Ahahaha!!! Ok-ok Im sorry! The young man extended his arm once again. Yadow grabbed his hand, and was let go once more. AHAHAHAHA!!!! Its even funnier the second time!! Phew, ok Im sorry, now for real.

Yadow denied and stood up on his own. I'm Mark. I'm Yadow.


Your arms....What happened to your arms? They were on fire a minute ago! Arent you burnt? Yeah. So? So? How did you do that?! What do you mean how did I do that? It's easy, just like this! The young man burst into flames. Yadow jumped back for a bit, scared that something might have happened to Mark, but then he noticed that Mark was unharmed, and that the flames did not consume him.

Wow! That's pretty cool. Yea, I am. Yadow stood silent for a few moments. So, you cant do that?
No. Huh. That's pretty lame. Hey! I can do something a thousand times better! Oh yea? Yadow took a fighting pose and started building up energy. What? Do you have to poo or something? Cuz theres a bathroom over th.... No! Just wait will ya! This takes some time. All right, but if you toot, Im outta here.... Both stood silently. Is this gonna take much longer, cuz....? *sigh* Dammit! I thought I had this down! It worked fine an hour ago! Maybe it's just- In this moment, a large explosion occured. Mark was pushed back.

Yadow was now surrounded by electricity, glowing and burning some of the grass. Huh? Told ya its awesome! Mark stared, in a thinking pose. Meh, kinda sucks. What?! Yadow stopped glowing, and the electricity faded. This is way more awesome than your stupid fire! Nah. Mine's cooler. The two looked at each other with a defiant look. So you think youre better than me?! , both of them yelled out.

Well I bet I can destroy that tree! Yadow threw a thunderbolt at a tree, which instantly burned down. Big deal, I can burn down all those trees. Mark ran towards a group of trees, and blew flames out of his mouth, burning down the trees. Oh yea? Well I can break down that wall!! Yadow pointed to a far away wall and started running towards it. NOT IF I DO IT FIRST!!! Mark raced past Yadow and smashed through the wall. First one to destroy the lights! Yadow jumped on some of the rubble from the wall and started blowing up the lights. Mark turned back and did the same.

This went on for a few other competitions, and the two ended up on another part of the Company.


The two young men were laying on the grass, burnt and bruised. I totally won! You did not! You only did like 3! I took down all the rest!

The shot then changes to a large room. It is practically empty, save for a couch in the middle. A young man was apparently sleeping while sitting on the couch. A door slid open, and a man came in.





While the group was walking around, a thunderstorn started brewing. This is a setup for Klaus. He was out training with the lightning. Yadow also tries to fight lightning, and is knocked on his ass, severely hurt. Lots of flashes. One big flash happens, and a lightningbolt hits right in front of the group. A large flash is seen, followed by thunder. Everything stays white The group thinks they got hit by the lightning bolt. As it clears up, we see Klaus, who had deflected the lightning bolt.

The group talks to him, but he simply runs off, jumps over the bridge and keeps running.

Well nice to meet you too.... The rain got more intense, and the group ran for cover under the old large bridge. Couldn't you stop the rain or something?! Well excuse me if I was distracted by a guy taking a fricking thunderbolt that was about to hit us. Why didn't YOU stop it? Maybe I did... Who the hell was that guy, anyway? He stopped the lightning from hitting us, and he was like nothing happened... Maybe hes an electro too? They told me there are no other electrokinetics... They also told you to kill people, didn't they?

The rain lasted for a while, so the group just stayed under the building, sitting and talking. Yadow was sitting and leaning against the wall. Angel was running around and backflipping off the walls. Steph was in the border of the bridge, manipulating the rainwater falling off the old bridge.

There's all kinds of people out there. People that powerful. I thought I was strong.... Meh, you'll get better. Maybe some day you might even last a minute against me. I could SO beat you! Well I can beat both of you with three arms tied behind my back! You only have two arms.... I never said they were MY arms.... The camera zooms away as the friends bicker and joke around.

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